Thursday, March 17, 2011

Paris in March

Dedicated to Louise Margaret Jackson


The bells toll in the high sun
As gentle waters of the Seine
Bathe the old cathedral of Notre Dame.
The large Rose window invites us in,
Amongst candlelight and incense;
And whispers of old, wandering souls.

The cold stonewalls are lined by statues
Of Saints, Green Men and ivy.
Promises and prayers, as pilgrims to and fro,
In traditions of new and old,
In this eternal play of light and shadow.

Then a sudden turn
And the purple light blinds us.
There is so much love in the detail,
It just takes our breath away.
And in that moment, I want to hold your hand.

We walk the spiral stairs
To the dizzy heights in the crisp air,
Overlooking the ancient city,
Guarded by giant gargoyles and lost chimeras.
There is a serene calmness, which guides us
As there is not much need for words,
Such is the comfort in knowing
It will stand against the test of times,
Always elegant and strong, above the skyline.

And so in the lazy afternoon
We find ourselves in its shade
In the dusty courtyard, amongst lovers
And passers by, dreaming of a different life
And what it would be like; and you my love,
The keeper of Notre Dame.


These are languid times
And we do not want to leave.
So we follow the bridge to a nearby café,
Sitting by the window as the white wine is poured,
And the palate meets the light taste of soft bread and fromage.

Night is falling with such ease,
There are brandy glasses and red velvet chairs,
Verdi’s Opera and Champagne coupes
And the opening night of Luisa Miller.

Such is the lyrical chant of voices past
As I sit, in rapture, by your side.
Stealing a look, unseen, as I watch you
Beautiful and poised in the Paris night.

Street lamps and headlights
Colour the city in this March night.
It still feels cold, and yet I am lost in your gaze
As it meets me halfway, smiling.
The piercing eyes, I am learning to navigate.

Like everything in this city
You seem to know the way.
Leading through the maps and long corridors
Of the Metro and my adoring heart.
I am vulnerable and whole,
And yet caught in your embrace.
And though I have sailed past many ports
In yours I will stay, my anchor, my city of lights.


Janete Cabral Copyright 2003-2011

35 comments:

Steve said...

Lovely. The lyrical quality - the adoring tourist eye reminds me of some early 20th century american poetry - Frank O'Hara in particular.

Janete Cabral said...

Thank you Steve. I will have to read more of Frank O'

Hara's work now. Hope all is well with you.

Janete

Etienne's Journal said...

Wow. I've got to say, I came on here to say thank you for the comment on my blog, but this poem really threw me. It was gorgeous. The last line... inspired. Thank you for writing that.

Secondly, I do still want to say thank you for that lovely comment, and for checking me out again. I'm always passionate about writing, darling ;)

Stay in touch. Best wishes!

Etienne

Janete Cabral said...

Hi Etienne.

It was my pleasure. I will certainly keep in touch. Always great to meet like minded inspired writers. There is a certain spark, don't you agree?

All the best

Janete

Steve said...

Janete, here is a link to one of Frank O'Hara's more famous poems - a wonderful peaen to Billie Holliday: The Day Lady Died. Hope you enjoy it.

Janete Cabral said...

Thanks Steve, that's brilliant I shall read it now.


janete

Janete Cabral said...

Steve, thanks for the link. I loved the very first verse.

"It is 12:20 in New York a Friday
three days after Bastille day, yes"

Brilliant, thank you.

Virginia said...

Janete,
Your beutiful poem brings me to tears. WE are kindred spirits in our love of Paris. Thank you for sharing it with me.

I am happy you enjoy my Paris photos. Please come by often.
Bises,
V

Virginia said...

Oh, and may I share a link to this poem on my blog soon?
V

Janete Cabral said...

Dear Virginia

Thank you for your very kind words I appreciate it!

Your site is fantastic, I love photography and certainly share the same love for Paris !

Bisous

Janete

Janete Cabral said...

Virginia,

of course, I would be delighted!

Bisous

Janete

Louise Jackson said...

I've tried to find the words to describe how this poem makes me feel, but I do not have that gift. So I simply say thank you.

You are in my heart.

When the memories fade, this poem will always take me straight back to our Paris.

Louise Margaret Jackson

Janete Cabral said...

Lovely. My memories too.

My Louise Margaret Jackson.

Nevine said...

Janete, what a lovely and lyrical piece of writing! It doesn't hurt that it all happens in one of my favorite cities in the world. Oh, Paris! Oh, memories!

Thank you for stopping by my place... and for leaving your trail.

Nevine

Janete Cabral said...

You are very welcome Nevine, thank you for your kind words. Especially coming from a fellow poet.

All the best


Janete

Joanne said...

Delightful, brings back memories of my trip there last year on my way to visit Monet's garden

Janete Cabral said...

Hi Joanne

Thank you for your lovely words. Hope you are well.

Looking for Siddhartha said...

very beautiful and romantic!

Renée

Janete Cabral said...

Hi Renee,

thank you for stopping by and your kind words.

Clarissa Draper said...

What a great poem. I felt like I was there, taking in all the sights and sounds and color.

Janete Cabral said...

Thanks once again Clarissa.

Trée said...

I was in Paris almost 20 years ago. Reading your poem, I felt like I was there again. Beautiful!

Misha said...

I haven't read a poem this beautiful in a long time.

Thanks for posting it.

:-)

Janete Cabral said...

Wow, 20 years is a long time Tree, you must go back, a lot has changed. Glad the poem transported you back. Writing to me is a bit like a journey...

Janete Cabral said...

Hi Misha

Thank you for you lovely comment. It is unashamedly romantic, but then again it is dedicated to the beautiful Louise Margaret Jackson.

Sulthana said...

That was lyrical and beautiful and romantic :) It was lovely to read.

Janete Cabral said...

Hi Sulthana

Thank you, your comment has made me smile.

swine said...

Brilliant. This reminds me of something Frank O'Hara might write.

Janete Cabral said...

Thank you Alex. I am going to have to read Frank O' Hara's work. Steve mentioned him too.

Shamiah said...

Lovely! hello, I am just a new writer too. And it's wonderful meeting you. :)

Janete Cabral said...

Hi Shamiah

Thank you and welcome !

Shachi said...

this is such a gorgeous poem... so beautiful and enveloping in its descriptions yet managing to be quite lyrical at the same time.
i'd love your input on my own writing! check out my blog :-)

Janete Cabral said...

Hi Shachi

Thank you for the very kind words, I love writing and never stop... although I don't always immediately publish as I like to leave it simmering. I shall pay you a visit.

All the best

Janete

fairytale1995 said...

Wow...just breath taking so heart felt I am truley inspired!:')xxx

Janete Cabral said...

Thank you fairytale !