Dedicated to Louise Margaret Jackson
The bells toll in the high sun
As gentle waters of the Seine
Bathe the old cathedral of Notre Dame.
The large Rose window invites us in,
Amongst candlelight and incense;
And whispers of old, wandering souls.
The cold stonewalls are lined by statues
Of Saints, Green Men and ivy.
Promises and prayers, as pilgrims to and fro,
In traditions of new and old,
In this eternal play of light and shadow.
Then a sudden turn
And the purple light blinds us.
There is so much love in the detail,
It just takes our breath away.
And in that moment, I want to hold your hand.
We walk the spiral stairs
To the dizzy heights in the crisp air,
Overlooking the ancient city,
Guarded by giant gargoyles and lost chimeras.
There is a serene calmness, which guides us
As there is not much need for words,
Such is the comfort in knowing
It will stand against the test of times,
Always elegant and strong, above the skyline.
And so in the lazy afternoon
We find ourselves in its shade
In the dusty courtyard, amongst lovers
And passers by, dreaming of a different life
And what it would be like; and you my love,
The keeper of Notre Dame.
These are languid times
And we do not want to leave.
So we follow the bridge to a nearby café,
Sitting by the window as the white wine is poured,
And the palate meets the light taste of soft bread and fromage.
Night is falling with such ease,
There are brandy glasses and red velvet chairs,
Verdi’s Opera and Champagne coupes
And the opening night of Luisa Miller.
Such is the lyrical chant of voices past
As I sit, in rapture, by your side.
Stealing a look, unseen, as I watch you
Beautiful and poised in the Paris night.
Street lamps and headlights
Colour the city in this March night.
It still feels cold, and yet I am lost in your gaze
As it meets me halfway, smiling.
The piercing eyes, I am learning to navigate.
Like everything in this city
You seem to know the way.
Leading through the maps and long corridors
Of the Metro and my adoring heart.
I am vulnerable and whole,
And yet caught in your embrace.
And though I have sailed past many ports
In yours I will stay, my anchor, my city of lights.
Janete Cabral Copyright 2003-2011
35 comments:
Lovely. The lyrical quality - the adoring tourist eye reminds me of some early 20th century american poetry - Frank O'Hara in particular.
Thank you Steve. I will have to read more of Frank O'
Hara's work now. Hope all is well with you.
Janete
Wow. I've got to say, I came on here to say thank you for the comment on my blog, but this poem really threw me. It was gorgeous. The last line... inspired. Thank you for writing that.
Secondly, I do still want to say thank you for that lovely comment, and for checking me out again. I'm always passionate about writing, darling ;)
Stay in touch. Best wishes!
Etienne
Hi Etienne.
It was my pleasure. I will certainly keep in touch. Always great to meet like minded inspired writers. There is a certain spark, don't you agree?
All the best
Janete
Janete, here is a link to one of Frank O'Hara's more famous poems - a wonderful peaen to Billie Holliday: The Day Lady Died. Hope you enjoy it.
Thanks Steve, that's brilliant I shall read it now.
janete
Steve, thanks for the link. I loved the very first verse.
"It is 12:20 in New York a Friday
three days after Bastille day, yes"
Brilliant, thank you.
Janete,
Your beutiful poem brings me to tears. WE are kindred spirits in our love of Paris. Thank you for sharing it with me.
I am happy you enjoy my Paris photos. Please come by often.
Bises,
V
Oh, and may I share a link to this poem on my blog soon?
V
Dear Virginia
Thank you for your very kind words I appreciate it!
Your site is fantastic, I love photography and certainly share the same love for Paris !
Bisous
Janete
Virginia,
of course, I would be delighted!
Bisous
Janete
I've tried to find the words to describe how this poem makes me feel, but I do not have that gift. So I simply say thank you.
You are in my heart.
When the memories fade, this poem will always take me straight back to our Paris.
Louise Margaret Jackson
Lovely. My memories too.
My Louise Margaret Jackson.
Janete, what a lovely and lyrical piece of writing! It doesn't hurt that it all happens in one of my favorite cities in the world. Oh, Paris! Oh, memories!
Thank you for stopping by my place... and for leaving your trail.
Nevine
You are very welcome Nevine, thank you for your kind words. Especially coming from a fellow poet.
All the best
Janete
Delightful, brings back memories of my trip there last year on my way to visit Monet's garden
Hi Joanne
Thank you for your lovely words. Hope you are well.
very beautiful and romantic!
Renée
Hi Renee,
thank you for stopping by and your kind words.
What a great poem. I felt like I was there, taking in all the sights and sounds and color.
Thanks once again Clarissa.
I was in Paris almost 20 years ago. Reading your poem, I felt like I was there again. Beautiful!
I haven't read a poem this beautiful in a long time.
Thanks for posting it.
:-)
Wow, 20 years is a long time Tree, you must go back, a lot has changed. Glad the poem transported you back. Writing to me is a bit like a journey...
Hi Misha
Thank you for you lovely comment. It is unashamedly romantic, but then again it is dedicated to the beautiful Louise Margaret Jackson.
That was lyrical and beautiful and romantic :) It was lovely to read.
Hi Sulthana
Thank you, your comment has made me smile.
Brilliant. This reminds me of something Frank O'Hara might write.
Thank you Alex. I am going to have to read Frank O' Hara's work. Steve mentioned him too.
Lovely! hello, I am just a new writer too. And it's wonderful meeting you. :)
Hi Shamiah
Thank you and welcome !
this is such a gorgeous poem... so beautiful and enveloping in its descriptions yet managing to be quite lyrical at the same time.
i'd love your input on my own writing! check out my blog :-)
Hi Shachi
Thank you for the very kind words, I love writing and never stop... although I don't always immediately publish as I like to leave it simmering. I shall pay you a visit.
All the best
Janete
Wow...just breath taking so heart felt I am truley inspired!:')xxx
Thank you fairytale !
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